Jerkward and Me *SERIOUS EDITING*

Jerkward and Me *SERIOUS EDITING*

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Lauren Hughes By kindofdauntless Completed

At the time, snow was Bella's favourite thing and Charlie wanted to give her everything so he gave her what she wanted most. He fled to a small town in Washington to begin a new life, in a cold place, minus his wife. 

Bella didn't fully understand the situation they were in and she saw it all as one massive adventure. It was strange, not having her mommy there, but she grew used to having only her dad. 

Things weren't good per say but everything was alright.

Well, that was until Charlie couldn't cope anymore.

She had no idea that the day her mom died would be the last day she truly had her father.



"My eyes nearly popped out of my head the second the word intimate left her mouth. It automatically sent a wave of absolute panic surging through my entire body. She wanted me to dance intimately with Edward? Maybe I should just jump off a bridge now rather than embarrass myself later. Surely she knows me better than that. How could she do this to me? If someone were to give me the death penalty, they would sentence me to be put to death by dancing intimately with Edward. I would drop down dead in embarrassment."

I can't wait to read the re-write of this! I loved it the first time but your writing style has changed so much - it's fab! I've noticed you're like half way through editing so I'm going to wait until you're done until I read it again. Don't rush though, take your time, love! ❤️
I'm muslim and I know some people think it was us or whatever but i am totally against terrorism and hate and this made me cry and I want to beat up ISIS and Al Qaeda and all those hateful people because hate sucks. A lot.
AnOtakuBookworm AnOtakuBookworm Jul 01, 2014
Poor Bella and Charlie, Such a true story that actually happened to many that day. R.I.P. 9/11 victims
AnOtakuBookworm AnOtakuBookworm Jul 01, 2014
Uh oh...I'ma need a lot of Ben & Jerry's for this! *peeks out from pillow fort and clicks next chapter*