Just another Marshall Lee x Reader Story. Original on Quotev
This sounds almost like a second grader with good word choice wrote it because everything was so damn short... But, Good book!
Maybe check your spelling and grammar and punctuation and get someone to proof read it before you post so you don't get any hate. Don't go trying to say "oh I'm new give me slack" you get criticism when you first start, not ask for no hate and to go easy on you. Check your story before you post it.
Why the hell did you switch from present tense to past tense???
If you're writing an x-reader you don't do it in 1st perspective you write it in 2nd...
Oh so I just fall down magically off my bed... Wait I feel like a dream... Marshall let u tsun tsun~!!
Yea you soooo didn't save me.I fell into your arms.Yup..that soooo happened.