Traveler's Code

Traveler's Code

332 Reads 10 Votes 1 Part Story
Panthera By Panthera Updated Jan 01, 2011

To be continued

  • creepy
  • love
  • tear
CrazyBookGirl CrazyBookGirl Jun 09, 2012
I love it.... because of, or in spite of, its strangeness. 
                              It's otherworldly and kind of creepy, but it resonates with me. =)
xxxXBabyDollXxxx xxxXBabyDollXxxx Mar 04, 2011
this is a very good story so far!
                              i really like the way you write to!
LavenderBreeze LavenderBreeze Feb 28, 2011
i have to admit that the story seems to be a good one if i could actually read it. its like your keeping it mystified but also having editing problems. you can still mystify while sounding clear to the reader. the story line itself seems good though
Panthera Panthera Feb 28, 2011
@Kirbyx I have added a few more sentences, hopefully those made it a tad bit more clear :)
Panthera Panthera Feb 27, 2011
@Kirbyx Thank you. The plot is to be revealed later, but I suppose you are right that maybe i should weave it in right here. As for what is happening- well, she is dying. I did not want to put it in plain language, but, darn, apparently I am mystifying it too much.... ? :P