To be continued
I love it.... because of, or in spite of, its strangeness.
It's otherworldly and kind of creepy, but it resonates with me. =)
this is a very good story so far!
i really like the way you write to!
i have to admit that the story seems to be a good one if i could actually read it. its like your keeping it mystified but also having editing problems. you can still mystify while sounding clear to the reader. the story line itself seems good though
@Kirbyx I have added a few more sentences, hopefully those made it a tad bit more clear :)
@Kirbyx Thank you. The plot is to be revealed later, but I suppose you are right that maybe i should weave it in right here. As for what is happening- well, she is dying. I did not want to put it in plain language, but, darn, apparently I am mystifying it too much.... ? :P