This is the first short story I have completed. I welcome all feedback!
I wished you did last thing first, not charging the fare and openly suggesting helping her
Thanks to all who read and left me comments! I appreciate it!
Not a problem to be honest I've not done much reading or writing . My dearest friend has taken ill and things are looking grim
@robe9425, @Strongheart, @WordSlinger - Thank you very much! Sorry it took so long to reply!
Great story! Now, I have to walk and think about what she was crying about. :)
@CottonJones Thank you Olan! For the help with editing, too :-)