Unexpected World Of Love

Unexpected World Of Love

7 Part Story 1.2K Reads 106 Votes
JaNix By janixdrighteous Updated May 28, 2012 08:19AM

Natalie was a loveless person although she had everything that girls wanted. Her mother had no guts to care her since she was little. Her relatives even not had loved her because she didn’t know them. Only her step-father treated her as a child but not exactly. She was the only child and yet they were rich but she live as a normal sweet girl with a humbled and good attitude. Her friend was the only one she treasured since that they showed to her how important she was. But one accident happened that changed her life miserable.
    As she entered her college life, a huge and unexpected revelation came to her whole life, and into her first experience to love.
    
    Find out as you read every chapter.

nycka19 nycka19 Oct 13, 2012 10:45AM
OMG.. I love this story... And about Natalie? she seems so sweet. You portray her so well.. =)) voted.. <3
Melody_Lee Melody_Lee Aug 30, 2012 05:07AM
Seen your story for quite a while but never try it but now I'm glad. This is really good. I'm excited to read another chapter. :)
DuhILoveYou DuhILoveYou Aug 30, 2012 04:52AM
Good start for introducing readers to your primary characters.Your sentences are a bit lengthy; minimal editing would reduce grammatical errors and improve the structure of the story. The direction and plot are intriguing and more than sound. It flows nicely as well. :)
DancingKitteh DancingKitteh Aug 30, 2012 03:01AM
This first chapter is really good and i love your details that you put for your charactors feelings!
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AuRevoirSimone AuRevoirSimone Aug 28, 2012 04:16AM
This is a great start! I really got a feel for your characters from the get go! :) Good job! :)