Taken

Taken

3.1K Reads 29 Votes 5 Part Story
Robyn By Robyn64 Updated Mar 12, 2013

Laura's mother died just two weeks ago, leaving her and her dad to somehow figure out a way to cope without her. But obsessive Oliver has other ideas. Following Laura one night after college, he forces her in to a van and makes off for a secret location. But who is this man, and what does he want with Laura?

Thewholething Thewholething Dec 22, 2010
good! you should check out unthinkable by thewholething i am editing it daily
TheFlamingPopsicle TheFlamingPopsicle May 22, 2010
I liked it until you started using the wrong quotation marks. It completely threw me off, and made me lose interest. Please use the double quote ones! ~~Alex