Emma *Wattpad Version*

Emma *Wattpad Version*

100 Part Story 19.8K Reads 635 Votes
A. Analise By Augustyne Completed

*Currently Editing* 
    
    Emma was just an average ordinary girl, or so she is led to believe.  One day Emma is caught in a web, and needs to find out what this all really means. She  looks for and turns to those close at hand only to be challenged.  Even by her own best friend! She knows naught what lies ahead but she will try and figure it out before it's too late. Will she be able to change the world or will the truth change her?

This story is off to a good start. You have a good story telling voice. This is a little more gentle than the kinds of things I normally read, but I am going to stay with it. I want to see what happens next.
This story is off to a good start. You have a good story telling voice. This is a little more gentle than the kinds of things I normally read, but I am going to stay with it. I want to see what happens next.
europia europia Nov 04, 2012 01:33PM
be sure to capitalize the beginnings of sentences :) otherwise, it was written pretty well and it was interesting :) and i agree, i love the cover! it kinda fits the story's voice i guess haha idk.
Augustyne Augustyne Oct 31, 2012 10:40AM
@Eloquencea You can direct that comment to YummyMentos, she made it for me :) I hope you enjoy this version. In print there may be a few additions/slices.
Augustyne Augustyne Oct 19, 2012 02:41PM
@Alaina_Boo_Boo Thank you, so sorry I didn't get back to you!
Alaina_Boo_Boo Alaina_Boo_Boo Aug 08, 2012 04:18PM
Hey! So I read it and I loved it! Soooo intriguing!! Girlfriend you have some skills!! I understand about the not editing thing- I do the same and yeah you had a few comma mistakes but otherwise you were golden!! I liked the third person as well :)