Spell Programmer [revising]

Spell Programmer [revising]

437 Reads 17 Votes 18 Part Story
Helena Seryma By helenaseryma Updated 4 days ago

The day I stole my first car it happened as a punishment for my crime. I was lost in life, angry and desperate. I wish I could disappear from this world. And he appeared out of thin air. The man turned my world inside out. But will I get back home alive?

The 1st chapter is my entry for the sci-fi contest January'18 Challenge: Indistinguishable. I liked it so much I continued it.

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SteveJBWO SteveJBWO Jan 27
Interesting twist. Not so much Science mistaken for Magic as a blend of Magical Science. I like it.
This is very interesting. Is the first chapter for the contest? And will you continue it?
I liked the description of the forest in the opening scene.  And you introduced a mysterious character who took the story forward.
                              It was a bit fast but he did contribute to make your chapter more interesting.