A girl does something she was never meant to do; enter the scary old haunted house, number 13. Follow her jounery through the house and the secrets she may find.
How about editing and expanding the story please? It's really good.....
I love this short story and I believe and i'm sure lots of other people would to that this story is worth a 2011 WATTY AWARD !!!!
good luck :)
Hey, I would give you a B. I mean I am no teacher or anything, but I liked it. I think you should add more to the ending though. :)
@MistressDemona yep I was only allowed no more than a 1000words but I already went over by 300 so I had to sort out an good ish ending In as many little words as possible
I'd give it a B+, it kinda leaves you in suspense, you expect a little bit more a bit in the end and you got a few grammatical errors.
awesome! i voted cuz love it! i would appreciate if you read my story called Clues to vampires!!! :)