house 13 ~Short Story~ house 13 ~Short Story~

2.1K Reads 31 Votes 1 Part Story
Holly By supernatural-lover Completed

A girl does something she was never meant to do; enter the scary old haunted house, number 13. Follow her jounery through the house and the secrets she may find.

joanne_marie1204 joanne_marie1204 Jul 20, 2015
How about editing and expanding the story please? It's really good.....
cheekymoneky cheekymoneky Jul 04, 2011
I love this short story and I believe and i'm sure lots of other people would to that this story is worth a 2011 WATTY AWARD !!!!
                              good luck :)
amazing10117 amazing10117 Feb 23, 2011
Hey, I would give you a B. I mean I am no teacher or anything, but I liked it. I think you should add more to the ending though. :) 
supernatural-lover supernatural-lover Feb 21, 2011
@MistressDemona yep I was only allowed no more than a 1000words but I already went over by 300 so I had to sort out an good ish ending In as many little words as possible 
MistressDemona MistressDemona Feb 21, 2011
I'd give it a B+, it kinda leaves you in suspense, you expect a little bit more a bit in the end and you got a few grammatical errors. 
cococookie cococookie Feb 21, 2011
awesome! i voted cuz love it! i would appreciate if you read my story called Clues to vampires!!! :)