Hi, I think it's obvious to those who have read this story that it needs major editing. I started the story when I was fourteen. That was three years ago. Some of the comments I have read have made it clear that the story needs editing and others make me smile.
Editing will be starting on Monday 18th July. I will edit one, two maybe three chapters a week at a time.
Just a warning, this will be posted on each chapter.
Love Lonely Dauntless xx