Cursed to Feed Off the Damned

15 Part Story 947 Reads 24 Votes
Kiki By kikinii Updated 2 years ago
He was the most dangerous creature on the planet, too bad he never suspected he'd finally be set free by an unsuspecting teenage girl. The only thing keeping her alive and him from killing her is the possibility of her holding the key for him to attain the revenge he seeks.
you're a good storyteller. from the clear descriptions of the sun to the creature to the forest, house and characters--you have a good grasp of Paige and Gabriel's changing thoughts and emotions. also, the switching of perspectives adds to the suspense and isn't jumpy. kudos!