My Royal Love

My Royal Love

278K Reads 8.4K Votes 22 Part Story
CC By wannabewriter1027 Completed

At 24 years old Lina Hale has yet to achieve much of anything in life. Being a free lance artist isn't your typical millionaire job ya know! Traveling from place to place, hoping to make the piece of art that will change her life. Just when Lina is about to give up on her dream job, she finds the most amazing 'piece of art' in Paris; her name is Madeline Agnist. The daughter of the wealthiest man in Paris.

  • drama
  • girl×girl
  • humor
  • lesbian
  • lesbianlove
  • love
  • romance
What is with the 4 dot+ ellipsises? They're only supposed to have 3 dots, and this isn't even how you use them. Try replacing them with commas or periods.
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What about jane's life here? If you want her so much, maybe you should stay? You made it sound like it is obvious she is the one who should leave with you instead of you staying with her
This sentence feels like it should be a part of the previous chapter.
I keep this story for like more than two years now and still make me fall inlove. Hey dude, continue writing. I'm a fan! ❤
The link at the top broke. I recommend removing it and/or replacing it.
Those dot lines should probably be replaced with commas. Also, that comma at the end of the last sentence should be a period.