Finding Her Way Home -Updating Regularly

Finding Her Way Home -Updating Regularly

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Alicia Noble By AliciaNoble Updated Aug 30

Clara O'Ryan has just moved to California all the way from Ireland. She misses her old home and especially her old friends. Alone in a new high school she must try to fit in while also balancing a difficult personal life. Will Clara ever feel like she's truly home ever again?

Brandon Thomson has lived in California his whole life. He's a popular guy in his high school but while he might seem like the life and soul of the party, Brandon is hiding parts of the real him behind his outgoing exterior. 

When Brandon and Clara meet sparks ignite and things only get more intense as they get to know each other.

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RyeZonShine RyeZonShine Feb 08
Aw, dear
                              I know how hard moving counties can be (especially when you move back again less than half a year later lol)
LyricalGrey LyricalGrey Feb 22
Instead of saying I put on some jeans you should say I put on a pair of jeans. It’s makes more sense to say a pair because you’re not putting on multiple pairs
jswift12 jswift12 Feb 09
Define a voice, if you switch...make sure we know it. Great so far
Me to a T lol. I'm happy that she's already making friends on her first day. I also really like that she's not mad at the world because she had to move. That happens a lot where the main girl is angry w/ everyone. Love it! #UndiscoveredGemsBC
LyricalGrey LyricalGrey Feb 22
I believe you should combine this paragraph with the last one above because you’re still on the same topic.
LyricalGrey LyricalGrey Feb 22
When you say ur reflecting on memories maybe u should add a mini daydream. Instead of just saying you had a memory, show it