Everlasting

Everlasting

441 Reads 8 Votes 4 Part Story
Mulberrysummer By Mulberrysummer Updated Feb 27, 2011

When the death horns blows they will come. judge you and rip you apart. Finding out you arent quite who you though you were and seeing your bestfriend killed before your eyes,  this is Bries life and she is only just learning what her true calling is

Shylee Shylee Jun 10, 2011
Love the idea and the suspense, but needs a little work on the sentence flow, have a check through, you'll see what i mean but otherwise love it. xxx