Cross Roads: The Monsters Among Us

Cross Roads: The Monsters Among Us

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Jeremiah Outlaw By btinovels Completed

In a series of bizarre murders around the Sycamore University, now more than ever people are getting restless and scared.  With no end in sight, a gift from heaven (so to speak) comes knocking on their doorstep.  A group of magical young ladies with immense strength and unfathomable intelligence, arrives as a godsend. As they delve deeper into the investigation, a story between what is righteous and what isn't stands firmly in the presence of what is really happening around campus.

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Hunter_Yonk Hunter_Yonk Jun 06, 2018
Check the first sentence. "The Nether does  not follow the rules of the Universe *and* has been considered..." would be a suggestion.
btinovels btinovels Feb 04, 2018
Yes, it is fiction.  In my audio blogs, I did explain that the world is more like ours but entirely different.  More like an alternate universe were magic and monsters co exist.
GMTSchuilling GMTSchuilling Feb 04, 2018
I didn't quite understand the first sentence here. Is there something missing?
GMTSchuilling GMTSchuilling Feb 04, 2018
Really detailed descriptions here. You have clearly researched this a lot. But perhaps many of these are better sprinkled within your chapters rather than given out here. Currently you are telling throughout the prologue, with no action or showing, which is difficult to engage the reader with.
GMTSchuilling GMTSchuilling Feb 04, 2018
Did you mean since the dawn of time? Till refers to the end.
RedBeeSandAmber2 RedBeeSandAmber2 Feb 25, 2018
This is so awesome, and cool and detailed and I absolutely A loved how you wrote