A whirlwind romance.

A whirlwind romance.

9K Reads 52 Votes 44 Part Story
Sarah By MsSarahLou56 Updated May 19, 2013

Anna is a teenager living in Mudeford, a little Dorset town, during World War II. Nothing really exciting ever happens there, until Luke turns up. Anna's life turns into a roller-coaster as she has to choose between who she truly loves.

  • death
  • deceit
  • first
  • love
  • war
CosmosInChaos CosmosInChaos Mar 02, 2011
Too much dialogue but in need of more detail! But this story has a lot of potential. I'll continue reading your story though. Keep it up!
MsSarahLou56 MsSarahLou56 Feb 27, 2011
@Nahimana_dara Thanku for reading :) and thanks for the advice,it is really helpful. Ok... So i'll need to put more detail in my story...?xx
MsSarahLou56 MsSarahLou56 Feb 27, 2011
@Kelsey9907 Thank u! I love writing it! :) I'm glad you are enjoying it! xx
Flyinghobo99 Flyinghobo99 Feb 27, 2011
This is a very good story so far. I absolutely love it!! you definitely need to keep writing. i just have to know what happens. :)