Cable Calamity

Cable Calamity

1.6K Reads 566 Votes 12 Part Story
borisjones1428 By borisjones1428 Updated Jul 01

A situation of calamity occurs on a vertical gradient ski cable car in Switzerland. When Roger discovers he is amongst those in danger of calamity, will he become a success in the art of escapism? Observe my narrative content to discover the answer ...

P.S: Please critique narrative as judged fit

  • adventure
  • austria
  • cablecar
  • danger
  • narrative
  • skiing
  • switzerland
ashley5967 ashley5967 Feb 21
The way you write tells me that you are wise....im surprised that this isn't on the hotlist....maybe someday it will be
Your way of speaking and describing really makes a huge difference!
                              Great job!
Ruonaa Ruonaa Jun 29
The unknown. No one knows what's gonna happen in the future.
                              
                              I like your narrative, and I'm not just saying this because I want you to return the favour. I really like it.
ltcarilb ltcarilb Jun 29
Love the foreshadowing and the uncertainty. It perfectly sets you up for the next part of the story.
Nico610 Nico610 Jan 29
Usually I got bored by this kind of story but yours are different for some reasons and I love how you described the story
4eva-single 4eva-single Jun 28
The complexity behind your writing style reminds me of Sheldon from The Big Bang Theory; simplicity is nonexistent in your vocabulary. However, this has proven to be rather intriguing considering if you were to write the same content using simple diction, it wouldn’t be that interesting.