Power that Lingers (Vampire Romance)

Power that Lingers (Vampire Romance)

3.6K Reads 96 Votes 10 Part Story
Superwoman By playgirl342 Updated Jul 13, 2011

The things that are happening tome are beyong scienctific explaination. 
I'm being aloud to experience the darkness, for its takiing over me. 
My blood is boiling with power I can not explain. 
And am thirsting for something that isnt water. 

My name is Silvia. I don't have a second name because i don't belong to any family.
The Vampire have caught me commuting a crime, and imprisoned me. They have almost killed me, but something has stops them. 
Instead they shelter me in luxury, and have me treated like part of their royalty. 
The strange atmosphere sometimes proves am not wanted. I don't know what they plan on doing to me, so am going to find out. :D

followyourheart01 followyourheart01 May 20, 2014
I just started reading and I honestly hav a great feeling about ths book:):)
- - May 09, 2011
this is a great chapter :) i was instantly hooked and i like Silvia :D voted!
SMILEY99552 SMILEY99552 May 09, 2011
There were a couple of mistakes but they could be easily fixed!! Other than that the chapter was great and it hooked me fron the start!! 
                              *voted*
Claudiaxcf97 Claudiaxcf97 May 09, 2011
I love it. Some grammer mistake here and there but it was well written and I really enjoyed it. Also it was really interesting and makes me want to know what happens next. About to read on to see what happens to the vamp guy..hehe. I love vampire stories. 
                              :P
ACRL37 ACRL37 May 09, 2011
nice cliffhanger =) I think this has potential to be a great story, but I would suggest re-editing it because as some previous posts said there are grammar errors and some misspelled words. However, I definitely think this could be a very good story, so I voted =) 
RNMurray RNMurray Mar 17, 2011
First I would like say great story, but there are some grammar error though.
                              You have a pretty good idea for a story so please keep working at it.