Lyrics Blaze Diamond Light was the punching bag of her pack. She wasn't the normal Werewolf.
Their names are a mouth full, and very intimidating ounce you think about it
I am going to legally change my name to that! That's awesome!
Pretty nice summary, but just a little blunt..... yet it's just fine.
This happened too quickly and seemed rushed.... I hope this will get better.... I really hope it's not another one of those stories where everything is typed almost like a summary and is extremely short and dull....
she is a white wolf the most powerful white wolf and her mother is the moon godess
Let me know what you think when you get done, I figured I might as well do this today and the first chapter tomorrow. You can delete my comments after you fix them, if you want