I thought I'd experiment and try telling a story through a poem. Please comment and tell me what you thing. Any suggestions will be helpful! :)
really nice flow, but its sad... but that doesnt bother me much :| i thikn its good to have different poems for different emotions, and you did really well... voted!
@AnaghaS Sure, I'm writing one now, I'll probably get it up by tomorrow. :)
@AnaghaS Yeah, I was in a particularly sad mood when I wrote this one. Usually I write happy poems, this was actually my first sad poem. :(
No problem! You did well, and that's nice your friends helped you. Hope to read more poems from you. =)
Thank you! I really wasn't expecting much when I started writing this one, I just wanted to convey a story through a poem so, I did. Well, I had a little help with the rhyming. I used a Thesaurus and some of my friends helped, too. :) Really, Thank you. It means a lot! :D
This is a really good poem. You expressed the emotions very well. Especially when he wished for death and wondered how life would be without him. Your rhyming is great and flowed nicely, and it's hard to rhyme.