Cytronica

For students of the Wynter Academy, the virtual world of Cytronica is the perfect after-school hangout. A private realm just for them and the local bots-no teachers, no parents.

Tired of its boring ways, five students find a way to tweak its code, altering the world as creatively as they see fit. The realm has limitless potential and possibilities; letting it go to waste would be a crime.

But rewriting the rules has consequences-what starts off as a fun experiment quickly becomes a dangerous situation as the once-safe world transforms into a lawless dystopia.

They need to make a decision: reset the realm before the school finds out, or push its boundaries and embrace the carnage.

But not all agree, and the students are forced to choose a side.

And as the chaos intensifies, an all-out virtual war looms, where only the strongest can survive.

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action
apocalypse
contest
cyber
dystopian
hack
matrix
school
scifi
survival
technothriller
teenagers
virtual
virtualreality
zombies

Okay, that's an awesome way to get the readers invested. And it sounds like you have a cool twist on the high school narrative! Although I usually enjoy a much more descriptive type of narration, I'm excited for what's coming!

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This is looking pretty good already! I like the story setup, what with the realms and rules and so on. The ending ends in a way which nicely piques the reader's interest, and I'm looking forward to reading more of this!

Interesting! I really like the concept of the different realms having different rules, being more or less complicated and nobody caring about the bots. And this is just the school realm, the public ones must be terrifying!

The characters are realistic and the interaction between them is amusing.

To be honest, this story is exciting. The title picture looks likes someone put a lot of effort into it and the description alone is amazing. Nice job, definitely ready to read this.