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The Smile (GirlxGirl)

The Smile (GirlxGirl)

134K Reads 3.1K Votes 16 Part Story
Breeze100 By Breeze100 Updated Jul 02, 2013

It was a dark night  that left a shadow over Jessica's sixteenth birthday. And from within the inky darkness she couldn't have possibly seen her coming; Kay. Not much of a name but one hell of a woman. Everything about her had Jessica entranced from the get go, but even her vibrant red hair and glimmering silver eyes, had nothing on that smile....

annie0555 annie0555 Jan 17, 2013
Vampire is always my fav genre :) And you writing is so balanced and addictive. :) voted
Alliex Alliex Jun 04, 2012
Omg this was a really good first chapter! It was short but you put enough detail and description in it that it doesn't even matter! I really like this :) Going to fan/vote and add this to my library. Well done :)
Breeze100 Breeze100 Jun 04, 2012
@dreamsmadereal Ahh ok thanks a lot for reading though. Thanks for thinking it's good even though it's not your type of thing
dreamsmadereal dreamsmadereal Jun 04, 2012
This is different to say the least. Although I'm not not vampire or girlxgirl, I thought it was good, and I couldn't find a single mistake.
Breeze100 Breeze100 Jun 04, 2012
@xxGucciGuccix Ahhh thanks for reading and for the heads up.
                              @Mkitty97 Haha really? And im glad you think it's cute :)
Mkitty97 Mkitty97 Jun 04, 2012
Naww this is so cute! this sounds like my friend with this girl she met :-p