It Started With Hate

It Started With Hate

2.1K Reads 34 Votes 8 Part Story
pita_10 By pita_10 Updated Apr 05, 2011

<Previously - Never Fall In love...Especially With Him!!> Never fall in love, that was Audrey's motto until Jayden came to their ALL GIRLS SCHOOL.  Complications had erupted which caused a few boys to come to their school.  When Audrey first saw Jayden her immediate reaction was 'playboy'.  Slowly everything started to change.....

  • humor
  • romance
  • school
Muahahaxoxo Muahahaxoxo Apr 24, 2011
Love the story but like @bookworm190 said, there are too many 'did I mention's in there.
                              Voted :D
writer_122 writer_122 Apr 15, 2011
Good story idea, but I agree with bloniebear. You could also make it flow a little easier... there are a lot of "did i mentions." but that's just my opinion (: It really is good, though
EternityIsOnOurSide EternityIsOnOurSide Mar 08, 2011
Interesting.
                              It could do with a bit of editing though. It's mostly just your sentence structure that needs work.
FlowerofHope FlowerofHope Mar 06, 2011
I like it!!!!! :D
                              
                              
                                                                                 -FlowerofHope-
pita_10 pita_10 Feb 27, 2011
@trishthewriter lol thanks its just that i have to go to an all-girls high school so i was wondering how would it be like if a few guys came to our school
                              
                              And lol yeah i noe i just got really lazy and i didn't feel like fixing the mistakes :P
trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 27, 2011
He has to go to an all girls school? Love it! So many stories start with a new kid in school, including some of my own, but this is something I've never seen before. It's great. There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but those aside I like the story. I voted.