It Started With Hate

It Started With Hate

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pita_10 By pita_10 Updated Apr 05, 2011

<Previously - Never Fall In love...Especially With Him!!> Never fall in love, that was Audrey's motto until Jayden came to their ALL GIRLS SCHOOL.  Complications had erupted which caused a few boys to come to their school.  When Audrey first saw Jayden her immediate reaction was 'playboy'.  Slowly everything started to change.....

Muahahaxoxo Muahahaxoxo Apr 24, 2011
Love the story but like @bookworm190 said, there are too many 'did I mention's in there.
                              Voted :D
writer_122 writer_122 Apr 15, 2011
Good story idea, but I agree with bloniebear. You could also make it flow a little easier... there are a lot of "did i mentions." but that's just my opinion (: It really is good, though
EternityIsOnOurSide EternityIsOnOurSide Mar 08, 2011
Interesting.
                              It could do with a bit of editing though. It's mostly just your sentence structure that needs work.
FlowerofHope FlowerofHope Mar 06, 2011
I like it!!!!! :D
                              
                              
                                                                                 -FlowerofHope-
pita_10 pita_10 Feb 27, 2011
@trishthewriter lol thanks its just that i have to go to an all-girls high school so i was wondering how would it be like if a few guys came to our school
                              
                              And lol yeah i noe i just got really lazy and i didn't feel like fixing the mistakes :P
trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 27, 2011
He has to go to an all girls school? Love it! So many stories start with a new kid in school, including some of my own, but this is something I've never seen before. It's great. There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but those aside I like the story. I voted.