Roland Heights

Roland Heights

673 Reads 17 Votes 5 Part Story
Keonah By Cranemmom Updated Oct 13, 2011

Amina has a past that she has escaped from but still carries the scars on her heart. She has started a new life in a new town and only believes love can exist between a caregiver and a child for her. When her favorite students lives change dramaticlly and she is introduced to thier father Seth Brendon she has to change her whole outlook on love and what it means. Once Amina is put into a possition where she can either accept that love is real or ignore it, will she make the right choice? Will she allow herself to be happy with Seth and the twins or will she let old wounds cause her to loose even the shadow of love she has clung to to survive? Will she see that sometimes love and family are as easy as "Just add water".

Cranemmom Cranemmom Mar 03, 2011
@Jane_Doe Thank you for that. And thatnks for being a fan. I am so excited that you guys love the story so far.
Cranemmom Cranemmom Mar 03, 2011
@emilyrb Thanks. I will definately do that. Every little bit helps in the end.
Raaawwrrrr Raaawwrrrr Mar 02, 2011
I love the way you use you r words, it's as if your painting a picture. You really draw the readers in! I like it so far! :D
                              Peace Love And All That Jazz
                              Jane_Doe
HeatherMcCorkle HeatherMcCorkle Mar 02, 2011
I felt for Amina right away. When I read "the last time I was hit" it gave me chills. This is a great start. I hope you keep writing it! I'd love your feedback on my young adult urban fantasy (and your vote if you enjoy it). Thanks! http://www.wattpad.com/1068305-the-secret-of-spruce-knoll 
Cranemmom Cranemmom Mar 01, 2011
 @JordanPark
                              Thanks. I really appreciate the comment. The praise really helps me to continue since people don't think it sucks. Thanks. 
                              
Cranemmom Cranemmom Mar 01, 2011
@purpleblackberry
                              Thank you so much. Keep looking. I will try to post soon.