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A Touch From Beyond

A Touch From Beyond

732 Reads 23 Votes 5 Part Story
Katie By supapenguin98 Updated Nov 28, 2011

When Brooke Mulligan is kidnapped and brutally murdered, she decides to live out the rest of eternity as a spirit.  Only once she has avenged her death will she go to her rest in peace.  Her chance arises when her kidnapper and killer strikes again, with a girl her age taken in almost identical circumstances.  Can Brooke stop her killer and save the next victim, with just a touch from beyond?

supapenguin98 supapenguin98 Sep 30, 2011
@writerluv101 Thanks for commenting.  Sorry it took me so long to get back to you - I'm really stuck on this story at the moment and I have looked at it in a while but I think I have some ideas so I might be uploading soon :)
fat4fudge fat4fudge Jun 28, 2011
this i quite creepy... But... I LOVE IT!!! Read the beginning of my story! Plus tell me what you think!
supapenguin98 supapenguin98 Feb 25, 2011
@RachaelMackenzie  Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, it's good to know that some people are reading my story and enjoying it :) As for the description, thanks for letting me know, I'll definitelt work on that for the next few chapters.
RachaelMackenzie RachaelMackenzie Feb 24, 2011
it is vary good but the one thing i would say is to describe the room she is in a bit more but other than that this is amazing
supapenguin98 supapenguin98 Feb 21, 2011
@ScarletBelle  Thanks for taking the time to read it, I really appreciate it and thanks for the heads up on thr typos, I'll pay more attention to it next time!