Darkest Touch

Darkest Touch

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You gotta be my friend to know! By HRHpotterhead Updated Oct 12, 2015

Being cursed inside a ring is the life Kyle Aeschylus was forced to lead after being banished from his village four centuries ago. Bound to forget everyone that mattered to him, including Caleb his twin, he was forced into a life of slavery. But Caleb will try everything in his power to save his brother and get him out the ring. But can he save his soul? ***Horrible at description but please read!! Not if you oppose to boyxboy or twincest though. If you aren't, enjoy!***

Elernis Elernis Jun 12, 2015
Holy shît that was brutal! This beginning caught my attention instantly! I love it already and I look forward to this story~
Salongirl97 Salongirl97 Sep 06, 2014
I liked it. For an intro though, it would have been good to understand why or when or how they became lovers since afterall, they are twins. But i really like it, hopefully there is more drama to come :)
HRHpotterhead HRHpotterhead Aug 23, 2014
@MissBookKeeper I love it the way it is and thinks it adds an air of mystery that I was going for. But thank you for the comment :)
Dasheri Dasheri Jun 13, 2014
Omg that was intense :( poor kyle  this is lookin good so far :)))
LadyMisT86 LadyMisT86 May 24, 2014
I like it. Did you make a flash back to how they get caught.
simaagn simaagn May 20, 2014
Wow... it's dark and great!  I can definitely see the influence of Sherrilyn's  book here....you did a great job. Very visual, the images, the feelings...