Steamship over Bascomm

Steamship over Bascomm

459 Reads 14 Votes 2 Part Story
Yoshi By CaptainLaceGoggles Updated Mar 04, 2011

Crime never pays, but what happen if you don't remember committing the crime.
Then welcome to the life of Noir, a girl arrested for something she might or not
have done.

Niccie_Sevyn Niccie_Sevyn Mar 04, 2011
lolz you guys are soo funny :)
                              
                              Okay well I really liked it but finish typing and upload. :)
CaptainLaceGoggles CaptainLaceGoggles Feb 18, 2011
Thanks guys, I have chapter one on the front burner.
                              It should be up by the end of next week.
JAStone JAStone Feb 18, 2011
The first line of a story is so important, it's the one that gets you hooked and asking the questions that make you want to read on.  "Guilty!  Guilty!  GUILTY!" - so simple but so effective.  Write on!