Without Rain, We drop

Without Rain, We drop

223 Reads 4 Votes 1 Part Story
S.A Wright By sadnessstarter1 Updated Dec 30, 2017

Without Rain, We drop is a Contemporary,light-fantasy that focuses on a young male named Kept after his Grandfather dies.Kept is not very Religious, unlike his grandfather.He acts in this way because this new religion is comparable to a cult and he cannot even have pure water.Is there a God?His principles have changed.Now, he feels that he has to avenge his grandfather and destroy the cult that led to this.Will he join his Grandfather?Will he drink decent water more than once? Will the cult be destroyed?

  • contemporary
  • craquelure
  • cult
  • depression
  • family
  • fiction
  • generalfiction
  • life
  • newadult
  • omniscient
  • teenfiction
CelestialNavigator CelestialNavigator Jan 02, 2018
whoa, do i see a  proper conflict of generations? You did a good job here. Also this Maoist cult is a curious one.
marthaeehathaway marthaeehathaway Jan 21, 2018
These strange words are interesting can’t wait to find out what they mean ✨
user11204945 user11204945 Jan 06, 2018
Nice prologue. Just try to make it more compressed. Otherwise it's perfect.
marthaeehathaway marthaeehathaway Jan 21, 2018
I’m a little confused by the whole prologue but reading the things about the seasons has given some clarification, however not much. I want to see some more explanation in the next few chapters hopefully as I think this story has enormous potential 💫
marthaeehathaway marthaeehathaway Jan 21, 2018
Just be careful with this as it could confuse the reader at the beginning with all the different names and relationships- I had to read it a few times myself to understand ✨
onemillionberries onemillionberries Jan 20, 2018
Lastly you have the tendency to use big words, most of which I -and I'm sure many others- don't understand. I don't want to be reading your book as well as looking up the meaning of half the words