Helium 3.0

Helium 3.0

18 Part Story 20.2K Reads 525 Votes
Nick Travers By NickTravers Completed

Today, at the centre of our galaxy, dwell small colonies of a most extraordinary species – humans.  Snatched from planet earth by slave traders they have a habit of escaping and finding more of their own kind.  Now their unique qualities have begun changing the course of galactic history.
    
    Fourteen-year-old Mervyn Bright possesses no special powers or advantages.  He has courage, tenacity, and three close friends from the Space Academy:  Loren, a brilliant but despised out-worlder, Tarun, heir to a once-powerful dynasty, and Aurora, niece to the embattled Patriarch.  Together they make a formidable team.

NickTravers NickTravers Jun 30, 2013 09:08PM
Thank youCelinaRose124, that is really encouraging.  I enjoy creating these characters and giving them stories, but I'm never sure whether anyone else likes them or not.  Thanks for making my day.  Nick
AshuraOu AshuraOu Aug 24, 2012 04:18AM
I think you are trying to introduce too many things at once. Also, I don't undersrand why they are jumping onto a dart or the importance of the Academy, whatever it is. It's a little too much to take in at once.
I've read up to the last updated page and really enjoyed it. I love how the first few chapters were written though things could use more details. I might even download the rest from your website.
Gingerale Gingerale Dec 20, 2011 11:38PM
Hey great story! btw, my name is Aurora too! sadly though i am not a niece of an embattled patriarch...-_-
NickTravers NickTravers Feb 25, 2011 01:43PM
If you like this story, check out my other story on Wattpad, NINA SWIFT: Gaia's Brood.  
                                    
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