Helium 3.0

Helium 3.0

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Nick Travers By NickTravers Completed

Today, at the centre of our galaxy, dwell small colonies of a most extraordinary species – humans.  Snatched from planet earth by slave traders they have a habit of escaping and finding more of their own kind.  Now their unique qualities have begun changing the course of galactic history.

Fourteen-year-old Mervyn Bright possesses no special powers or advantages.  He has courage, tenacity, and three close friends from the Space Academy:  Loren, a brilliant but despised out-worlder, Tarun, heir to a once-powerful dynasty, and Aurora, niece to the embattled Patriarch.  Together they make a formidable team.

NickTravers NickTravers Jun 30, 2013
Thank youCelinaRose124, that is really encouraging.  I enjoy creating these characters and giving them stories, but I'm never sure whether anyone else likes them or not.  Thanks for making my day.  Nick
AshuraOu AshuraOu Aug 24, 2012
I think you are trying to introduce too many things at once. Also, I don't undersrand why they are jumping onto a dart or the importance of the Academy, whatever it is. It's a little too much to take in at once.
BitterSweetSoup BitterSweetSoup Dec 28, 2011
I've read up to the last updated page and really enjoyed it. I love how the first few chapters were written though things could use more details. I might even download the rest from your website.
Gingerale Gingerale Dec 20, 2011
Hey great story! btw, my name is Aurora too! sadly though i am not a niece of an embattled patriarch...-_-
NickTravers NickTravers Feb 25, 2011
If you like this story, check out my other story on Wattpad, NINA SWIFT: Gaia's Brood.  
                              
                              If you want to read Helium 3.0 faster than I post it, you download the whole book free at Smashwords.com or via my website.
                              
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