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The Broken Fade

The Broken Fade

1.6K Reads 124 Votes 15 Part Story
Lim Mei Lin By RainingPotato Updated Jun 11, 2012

16 year-old beauty Emma Collins thought she that she was leading a perfectly perfect life until the arrival of the heart crumbling news of her parents' death appear at her doorstep. As everything slowly began to topple before her, will Emma finally be able to face reality in the face and challenge destiny and truth in this final round, together with her considerate and caring friends? This story of Emma, Cath, Hazel, Aurel and Krissy's never ending circle of friendship reveals it all.

itsKristen itsKristen Jun 15, 2012
HMm, quite interesting! I like your characters. I didn't see any mistakes at all :)
SangieBangie SangieBangie Jun 15, 2012
I like it.  This was very emotional, you are an amazing writer. 
                              You had a nice flow, descriptions are great, and I didn't catch any mistakes.  
                              Over all, an amazing prologue.
RainingPotato RainingPotato Jun 14, 2012
@Shareese86 Aww thanks a lot for the nice comment and for voting :) I appreciate it~
Shareese86 Shareese86 Jun 13, 2012
Wow thats so sad I love the way this was written. I like how u described her emotions while detailing her surroundings and her relationships and its not till the end of page one that u say her parents died nice voted!
xxkathyxx xxkathyxx Jun 13, 2012
Nice cover. Great idea for a story and congratulations on your writing's very excellent. I got what you wanted to show us or what to make us feel. keep it up :P
RainingPotato RainingPotato Jun 13, 2012
@im_a_dork thanks ;D well, the more it is dramatic, the more you can feel and imagine it in real life, aye? Haha