Shattered Gems (One Direction Fanfic) *ON HOLD*

Shattered Gems (One Direction Fanfic) *ON HOLD*

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Katie and Georgia By XxxKatie_GeorgiaxxX Updated Jul 10, 2012

Harper and Adalaide, just normal teenage girls, hanging out with abnormal boys. One day, they are stolen away from all reality by a cruel man, who enjoys their suffering, The one thing their abductor underestimated was the friendship between them and teh boys. One of them is madly in love with Adalaide and will do anything to get her back. The other, well he has been crazy about Harper since the day they met, he also will do anything to bring her back safe and in his arms.

  • adalaide
  • amethyst
  • clyde
  • diamond
  • harper
  • harry
  • liam
  • louis
  • niall
  • nightclub
  • starbucks
  • tristan
  • zayn
bunbabestyles bunbabestyles Jul 02, 2012
I love it so far! But you should really break up the dialoge, it makes it eaiser to read and understand! :-)
SmileyXBooX SmileyXBooX Jun 28, 2012
Hi! I love the story. Love the idea but if you could change the format to like all the other stories on Wattpad, it makes them a lot easier to read and more people will actually read it. 
                              Love the idea though! If you need someone else to edit it, there is an Editing Forum you can join.