a thrilling adventure awaits , as a suspensive and mysterious couple moves next door to this very normal family. Is it going to affect their monotonous routine and take them on an adventure? find out as surprises unravel and secrets are let out .
i have kinda lost interest so i was planning on leaving it here for a few days till i come up with some fresh new ideas ;p
So much better!!! I really liked this chapter :D Good description in this and good way to keep readers drawn in on the chapter-you're getting the hang of this now ;D you better extend this chapter a lot more soon ;) !!!
second chapter has started off but it can go pretty much anywhere from here so feel free to drop off any suggestions people PEACE:p READ AND WRITE :p
thanks sades i have uploaded the second chapter although i haven't finished it yet so if u wanna have a go at it. thanks soo much for reading it hope you enjoyed it :P
Heya, finally got to read your story, hope you can update again soon, would like to hear more about these new neighbours :) (it's sadie btw, just in case you didnt know)
I MOST DEFINITELY WILL THANKS FOR APPRECIATION ITS ONLY MY FIRST TIME I HAVE THE PLOT OF THE NEXT CHAPTER READY JUST NEED TO FIND SOME TIME TO WRITE IT DOWN :P