Snow White lives like Robin Hood

Snow White lives like Robin Hood

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chocochipAly By chocochipAly Updated Aug 07, 2014

Victoria Hepburn gets her chance of a lifetime when she gets chosen to go to New York to cover a story for her school. When she hears about this she's ecstatic, she quickly accepts and pretty soon she's on her way to New York with one of her best friends Cole Martin. Thinking that it's her chance to explore the city that never sleeps, she sneaks out and tries to do a little sight seeing. But when an accident happens that throws her into the middle of a fairy tale-like world, she soon discovers a whole new meaning to the word adventure.

  • fairytale
  • fantasy
  • gypsy
  • love
  • new
  • newyork
  • pirates
  • robinhood
  • romance
  • snowwhite
  • teen
  • york
sophiabelle sophiabelle Jun 04, 2012
I like how you started the story with a dialogue; it just makes everything quite realistic. There's not many errors, so overall this is really we-written! Good job x
ambiemills ambiemills May 21, 2012
I totally and completely agree with @ysabek its a good story line, but your grammar definitely needs work, and you do need to have faith in yourself! but great idea!
chocochipAly chocochipAly May 16, 2012
@Peace3Love Thanks so much:)) I'll work on it as soon as I can.
Peace3Love Peace3Love May 15, 2012
This chapter is good!
                              The grammar is fine and you write well.
                              The picture you chose for your cover is great but I think it needs work done.
chocochipAly chocochipAly May 14, 2012
@ysabek Thanks for your honest opinion!:)) I'll work on it right away
chocochipAly chocochipAly May 14, 2012
@BlurryWords Thanks so much for the advice!:) I appreciate it:))