Raptor Wing : Saviors of the Skies

Raptor Wing : Saviors of the Skies

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BirdoftheHeart By BirdoftheHeart Updated May 13, 2012

They thought it would all end with World War I.

The were wrong.

World War II was dubbed 'the war to end all wars'

They were wrong again.

World War III has started. And the battle begeins in the skies.

  • fighter
  • jets
  • planes
  • raptor
  • war
  • wing
- - May 11, 2012
This was amazing :) I enjoyed the way you wrote it in third person :) I think its very hard to write in third person and you did it exceptionally :) Also I couldn't find any faults with grammar or punctuation or anything :D Maybe its because I was enjoying it too much :) 
                              
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