Tyler's Teddy

Tyler's Teddy

1K Reads 150 Votes 1 Part Story
Miss Haykeke By XsnailyX Completed

"I’m sitting here in this white bland room, in these over-used chairs waiting. About two minutes ago I was pacing, nerves are kicking in ..."  '“You will have to wait for the doctor’s report. “ The nurse gave me a weak, sympathetic smile...' "Is he going to be okay?" "Dr. Roberts cleared his throat, and exhaled slowly"

Thatonehotbitch Thatonehotbitch Nov 12, 2012
the first line really ws a great hook! 
                              but HOLY CRAP THAT WAS SO FREAKING SAD. It was an amazing short story.
hernameisX hernameisX Nov 10, 2012
SO SAD!!!!! But SOOOOO GGOOODDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                              It touched my heart:) Very well written!!!! I must read more of your stories..........;)
- - Nov 06, 2012
Omygosh! I started to cry because it was so sad.. I thought it was very well writien and can not wait to read more of your workS!!!!!
Mr_Aek Mr_Aek Oct 29, 2012
very good story - I suggest adding more examples of her not being able to wait (instead of just the xmas one) and on the 2nd page you had a number you shoulda written out :)
NeverEverAfter NeverEverAfter Oct 29, 2012
It was really sad I almost cried.... For that I love it and I wish you all the luck in the world in the Watty Awards