Four White Walls

Four White Walls

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Leah By LeahT92 Updated Mar 29, 2011

Everything in Malakai's life is counted out by fours. His steps, his food, and even the brush strokes in his hair. His Obsessive Compulsive Disorder controls his life. One day, his mom can't take it anymore and sends him to the Beauville Mental Institution to get help. There, Mal meets some strange people and even a beautiful girl. This beautiful girl, Autumn, has many great traits... she has the multiple personality disorder! There's just one problem... one of her personalities doesn't like him. Can he win over all of Autumn's personalities?

isayrawr isayrawr May 12, 2011
this is so interesting. and my favorite number happens to be four so this is so awesome. keep it up. I'm hooked. :D
- - Feb 28, 2011
Malakai Sounds happy :D first thing when i was reading this was AAH (:p) at the white page...then im like poor Mal with your white walls... but now im all :D :D so curious about the romance (OOOoooOOOhhh xD) >>> on to the next chappy :D :D 
NyGirl NyGirl Feb 17, 2011
I loved this! You did such a great job expressing Malakai's OCD condition and how hard it can be on the parent and how the parents reaction affected him. Can't wait for more.