comment vote and read it please!
Hey sorry it's really short and not reall together but yeah :P
You've done well! Great job on the changes. It makes it much easier to read and makes it seem like the chapters go by quicker. Keep up the good work.
@ShadowPup i spaced out the paragraghs more when i first posted it it all fit on one page so i think i did good so far :P
@Maryam_SriLankan thanks!your story is great to :)
@tebone 1990 thanks for advice ill get to work on theparagraphs right awayi dont do so great with grammer but ill try :)
thanks for comment you guy/girls :)
WOWWWW...I Really Liked It
U Describe Things In Detail...Which a Good Thing (Y)
Ur A Great Writer!!!!!!!! =D