What Happened to Goodbye?

What Happened to Goodbye?

75.8K Reads 2.7K Votes 21 Part Story
deen By writerdean Updated Nov 22, 2016

Alannah Bynes life has been everything but normal. Seven years ago a man named Dean Winchester stepped into her life, she thought it was love at first sight. But when he left her in the emergency room with questions piling up to the ceiling she wasn't so sure. Finally after countless hours of wondering what had hurt her all those years ago when Dean and his brother had saved her, she figured it out. Demons. Spirits. They were all real.

Good story. But you don't have any proper indentations. Just a tip from one writer to another.
SammyGirl_96 SammyGirl_96 Aug 21, 2016
That's my first name and it's spelled the same way. Not many people spell it like that.
child_of_ares2734 child_of_ares2734 Oct 25, 2016
dean that's not how you end a relationship (bUT THE WRITING IS AMAZING OMG LOOOVE IT)
gerarclvvay gerarclvvay May 02, 2015
Prologue (sorry if you don't like people correcting your spelling)
- - Mar 17, 2015
An interesting start! I thought I'd check out more SPN fanfics on here, as I've just started my own, and this is lovely thus far!
Mialise Mialise Mar 14, 2015
This is an amazing prologue! I'm hooked now! But I would prefer if you can add a little more detail to what they were doing in the first part and how the pain in her and the pain inside of him hurts. If you write in 1st person...man this story will...unbelievable! Great job so far, though.