Life inbetween Living and Dreaming GirlxGirl(Editing)

Life inbetween Living and Dreaming GirlxGirl(Editing)

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AliciaBloMieLudick By AliciaBloMieLudick Completed

Brooke is a Young up and coming director who just
Moved to LA to see if her dream can become a reality.
Along the way Brooke meets Sarah a lively rebelish girl 
and Brooke has a few hard discions about love and life that she has to make 
Brooke could always get any girl but would this be the girl that she couldn't?

jamilove123 jamilove123 Jul 20
Alls I'm saying is the main character better not die. Like please spare me
AliciaBloMieLudick AliciaBloMieLudick May 12, 2014
Hey everybody I am rewriting this story and will editing every chapter hopefully making it even better for all of you
AliciaBloMieLudick AliciaBloMieLudick Aug 28, 2013
@therapybegins Ofcourse this is an amatures writing site and not my first language.
therapybegins therapybegins Aug 28, 2013
There are quite a few grammar mistakes and even more in sentence structure. Other than that it's a good start