Secret

Secret

673 Reads 10 Votes 4 Part Story
Zinx10 By Zinx10 Updated Jul 11, 2011

Zalee has powers. magical powers.

when Zalee Starts having nightmares about horses, she knows some things wrong. When one night she has a horrible one and wakes up parralized.
Can Zalee walk again?
Are the horses the only ones who can help her?

EmmaMargaret EmmaMargaret Mar 22, 2011
Good job, i really like this. It's a really good idea and is pretty interesting! I will defiantly read some more.
                              The only thing would be to try make some of the events flow a bit more. But other that it is great :) well done.
                               
Lizzy151 Lizzy151 Aug 31, 2010
Its pretty good for your first book! i like it, and i recomend u keep writting! just re-read the story and check your grammar, and it will be 10 times better :) pease check out my stories too! GREAT STORY!!!