Becoming Fae

Becoming Fae

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Live4fantasy By Live4fantasy Completed

Amethyst Jewl Book 1: Water

Crystal Erin Smith was just like any other teen, but that all changes as when she learns what she really is.Follow Crystal (aka Amethyst) through the ups and downs, loves and losses of Becoming Fae. (Currently doing some heavy editing and re-writing)

Just an observation: why hasn't anyone mentioned the fact that her eyes are purple?
I really like how you made her so short what fae are,are wondering girls and stand at 5 foot' but thats only in the legends so good job!
Emmalee_Sky Emmalee_Sky May 12, 2011
i really like this start. a suggestion: if you separate the dialogue from the paragraph it would be easier to read. voted <3
Live4fantasy Live4fantasy Mar 10, 2011
@jamilla Thanks! Spellings a bit off because I update from my iPod mostly.
Live4fantasy Live4fantasy Feb 17, 2011
@craazy8 Thanks I put that name in as a little shout out to ya
craazy8 craazy8 Feb 17, 2011
I love it!! You better post often or else!! And I love one of Hailie's friends name:))