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The Queen Of Darkness (A Short Story) (Non Vampire).

The Queen Of Darkness (A Short Story) (Non Vampire).

1.7K Reads 44 Votes 1 Part Story
Jay Lexis By aTouchOfClass Completed

Here's a story about five beautiful Princesses who are sisters and are parts of the earth they later on become Queens who all marry the same King, they each seem to have something the King desires but read happens when jealosy takes over the eldest sister the Queen of night? Who later on is called (The Queen Of Darkness) by the people of the kingdom do to her evil.

bird107 bird107 Nov 13, 2011
i really really really enjoyed readin this story but i also believe that the ending has been rushed. However, love this anyway :D
aTouchOfClass aTouchOfClass Jul 28, 2011
@answerthecall Haha yes I actually got it from the book placed in my mind :P haha thank you so much for reading I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D and think it's AMAZING!!!! :)
Warrior_Prophet Warrior_Prophet Jun 28, 2011
@aTouchOfClass Guess! Sod it! I'll vote cos I thought the end was clever... Nuff said lol
Warrior_Prophet Warrior_Prophet Jun 27, 2011
@aTouchOfClass I recognise sarcasm no problem. The more wittier the better!
Warrior_Prophet Warrior_Prophet Jun 27, 2011
Not my thing but the end was great! Even for a short story it could and should be longer. It needed more danger. If someones off to the north pole I want to hear how hard it was to get there... Anyway love the cool ending!
jellibelli jellibelli Jun 25, 2011
hey sorry tht i didnt comment sooner i was busy but i agree with @nineler