A Girl called Fib & the Axe of Fury

A Girl called Fib & the Axe of Fury

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Esosa Kolawole By myroseswillhuntyou Updated 3 days ago

Stumbling upon a reaper is weird
Having a vision of your classmate dying in a massacre is scary
Playing a teenage detective with a magical gift is tiring
Secrets are revealed, friends are lost and worst of all, trusts are broken...

  • badboy
  • girl
  • highschool
  • magic
  • romance
  • seer
  • superpower
fantalf fantalf May 19
 #BBC I was wondering until now if even when she was in the shower, she wouldn't take her glasses off
Doctreez Doctreez May 17
Never heard of it. Super interesting, though! Where is it from?  Páko, I mean! :)
Avalife Avalife Apr 22
 #BBC
                              
                              I appreciate the fact that you are Interpreting some African terms and your work has a very vivid description. It is a good chapter and it's error free. Keep it up.
Avalife Avalife Apr 22
 #BBC
                              I don't really know what pako means and the statement "I thought to myself is not necessary "
- - May 07
 #BBC
                              Hey! What's your problem with red? I personally think red is a nice color. It's like blood on a white t-shirt and it looks rather nice on my murder victims-
                              
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Molly515 Molly515 Apr 14
Did she say that as she rose from the seat or before or after? A good writing tip is to always say what the character is doing as they are talking before you even bring up what they are saying. It feels more natural.