Captured by an immortal

Captured by an immortal

2.4K Reads 49 Votes 10 Part Story
Melis-E-Rowe By Melis-E-Rowe Updated Jan 29, 2014

READ THE IMMORTAL- AN UPDATED VERSION OF THIS STORY - I T HAS BEEN CHANGED ALOT!

SecretInTheShadows SecretInTheShadows Dec 19, 2010
Good story.And from the descrption of Adrian he sounds like he looks alot like Ian! And hey Jorgiie, l didn't know you were reading this too, awsome!
SecretInTheShadows SecretInTheShadows Dec 19, 2010
Aww, that's sad. Good story though. l probly would've asked the same thing.
Vanilla_mandee Vanilla_mandee Mar 23, 2010
i think you did a wonderful job on the descriptions, im actually able to picture what she is looking at.
                              very well done :D
ambersunset24 ambersunset24 Feb 10, 2010
wait, so did he handcuff her back up her not? i think he did, but not sure xD
Melis-E-Rowe Melis-E-Rowe Nov 11, 2009
Comments People! 
                              Thanks for reading so far and voting!
                              But i gotta know what you think!
                              Let me know. !!1
                              Mel. x :D x