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Good story.And from the descrption of Adrian he sounds like he looks alot like Ian! And hey Jorgiie, l didn't know you were reading this too, awsome!
Aww, that's sad. Good story though. l probly would've asked the same thing.
i think you did a wonderful job on the descriptions, im actually able to picture what she is looking at.
very well done :D
wait, so did he handcuff her back up her not? i think he did, but not sure xD
Thanks for reading so far and voting!
But i gotta know what you think!
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Mel. x :D x