Mosaic

Mosaic

482 Reads 2 Votes 5 Part Story
Aznan By NeoNecro123 Updated Mar 03, 2011

Rex has always been a loner. His world is about to get turn upside-down and he's none the wiser. Events that will shatter his whole perception of reality is coming and his destiny beckons. Will he survive to discover what his fate entails?

tianajade tianajade Feb 18, 2011
It's a good beginning. You don't need to have your dialogue in bold writing though. It started off a little slow. It needs more description, as well. I think it needs a little work, but it's a good start and the story line seems interesting (: Keep writing!
Katt29 Katt29 Feb 18, 2011
Wow! can't wait for the next part. this is really interesting 
                              
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