1.2K Reads 150 Votes 12 Part Story
Jupiter By Larnee109 Updated Mar 11

Since I was young I have lived by three words. 
Don't trust humans. 
Since then I have done exactly that, well, until now. 
Now, I have completed my years of training and given a job I hope I will like, or maybe even enjoy. 
Now, I have travelled through space for two weeks, all the way to the home planet of the humans; Earth. 
I am in the most dangerous planet for a person like me, an Avian. 

I just hope I can fly fast enough. 


748B is a face in the crowd. Living on the hottest continent, Summer, on a nameless planet, she endures training at the academy. Just like every Avian from the age of four. 
Except, when it comes to the test you take after nine years of training, 748B failed it. 
Failed it so bad that she was forced to endure yet another year of brutal training and embarrassment, luckily passing the same test with flying colours. 
Now, 748B must face her fears and overcome the challenge of trusting while debating and bartering for her home trading system. 
All to do with the deadliest race in their section of the universe; the humans. 


*this isn't a werewolf story
*highest rank's for 'Human'
#116 in science fiction 19/01/18
#236 in science fiction 16/01/18
#249 in science fiction 04/01/18 
#753 in science fiction 29/12/17
*credits to whoever made the picture I used from good Ol' Google 
*everything belongs to me besides planet earth and its residents (but the characters mentioned are mine) 
*hope you enjoy and don't forget to comment your opinion!! I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing

  • aliens
  • continent
  • differentplanet
  • earth
  • future
  • girl
  • human
  • humannature
  • nearfuture
  • planets
  • sciencefiction
  • scifi
  • space
  • spacetravel
  • wings
RosyDude RosyDude Jan 13
This is amazing. I don't usually add unfinished stories into my library... but I easily made an exception. I love how ORIGINAL the plot line is 😍
ChrisDiMatteo ChrisDiMatteo Dec 25, 2017
This start is impressive! Your world building is fantastic and I’m pretty excited to see what the results are to this test and how it will impact her life.
-_Ninja_- -_Ninja_- Dec 20, 2017
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This is an interesting, unique concept and I am loving it so far! Great job!
AbbyLWalter AbbyLWalter Jan 05
Great story! Would you mind checking out mine? I'm new at watt pad and I'll greatly appreciate it :)
CJPlots CJPlots Jan 15
I love how you described the movement of the wings while she was stretching. So beautiful too and rather cute.