Life Bites Sucks and Kills

Life Bites Sucks and Kills

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xxAprilxx By xxAprilxx Updated Oct 25, 2010

Allie Brooks has just found her mother dead but she knows that there is something seriously wrong with how she died, Her brother is keeping secrets and her fathers got a new lover. Anwsers won't come fast enough

lippylou lippylou Nov 17, 2011
@vicky_nfs  i agree with u it is a great start :) xxx Add more detail xxx
lippylou lippylou Nov 17, 2011
@Just-Nikki i agree with you it does need to be a bit more interesting to make me read on more :) xxx
Just-Nikki Just-Nikki Jul 23, 2010
I agree with @Vibrant LOL, really random combing her hair.
                              
                              The main character is cool but like I would totally go nuts if my mother died, almost in a state of depression, but maybe that's just me.
Just-Nikki Just-Nikki Jul 23, 2010
Hey :)
                              I think you need a bit more descriptions to make me feel the full tone of shock but other than that, I'm liking this. I'm going to read more. :)
                              
                              You have my vote.
Vibrant Vibrant May 06, 2010
hey....with her mom dead why would she go brushing her hair....you know what i mean?
                              its an hour back almost that her mom died...try fixing that....:)