The Witch of Camelot

The Witch of Camelot

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romanhobbit By romanhobbit Completed

At five years old Nimue moved to Camelot to live with her uncle, the kings own adviser, Merlin Ambrousius. Four years later another equally mysterious young person arrives in the city and takes up residence with Nim and her uncle. His name is Arthur, and to him a destiny is revealed that he never even dared to dream of. Nim and her uncle along with a few others will accompany Arthur on his journey and none of their lives will ever be quiet or simple or safe again....

This is my first upload on a site like this and i would just like to get some fed back. I write a lot, this ones kinda like a side story. I'm going to admit I always feel rather stupid when my friends read my stuff because I'm always sure its awful and they just aren't going to tell me so this seemed the best way to get some more honest fed back. always looking for advice if anyone is willing to give it.  Thank you for reading this (if anyone actually does) comments and suggestions would be much appreciated and any stories that you would recommended i read :)  Thanks RomanHobbit

  • arthur
  • arthurian
  • battle
  • camelot
  • emrys
  • heir
  • love
  • magic
  • magical
  • marriage
  • merlin
  • nimue
  • pendragon
  • throne
  • vivian
  • witch
GrneyedIrishrose GrneyedIrishrose Jun 19, 2014
..., down below us peasants dribbled through the main gateway; some in small groups.
barbc9 barbc9 May 29, 2014
Beginning was very predictable, and have read in simi
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Blackfairy95 Blackfairy95 Nov 09, 2013
Somehow seeing Fiennes and Armitage in a book/movie idea together sounds...pretty Radical. Hedlund as Arthur? totally!!  You rock!!
kelis200 kelis200 Sep 27, 2013
bravo iv found the book iv been waiting for..girl u write good!!!!!!
nickjenkins nickjenkins Sep 23, 2013
I like the use of words and imagery, but it doesn't flow that well for me. The sentence/clauses are a bit long. Try reading it out loud and see what you think....