The Hell we called Gallipoli [editing/rewriting]

The Hell we called Gallipoli [editing/rewriting]

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TheAwesomeJayJay98 By TheAwesomeJayJay98 Completed

4 August 1914, the beginning of WW1. Young men jumped at the oppurtunity for adventure. In Australia, 16yr old Benjamin Thomas wasn't going to pass up the oppurtunity for adventure and excitment. He lies about his age and gains himself a place in the Australian and New Zealand Army Corps, ANZAC. Though he and his mates had not the slightest clue of what really wait ahead of them, and it sure wasn't what they expected.

Unicorn_Weirdness Unicorn_Weirdness May 19, 2015
Why did u say 'help us keep our promise to ENGLAND!' Cuz i know that the Australian army did not have any promise with England so can u explain that cuz i have a project about ww1
TheAwesomeJayJay98 TheAwesomeJayJay98 Jul 15, 2012
@ladybug101 Yeah, I agree. I was thinking about rewriting it. The quality in this is pretty horrible. Thanks for the comment though. I really appreciate it :D
Dearest_Writer Dearest_Writer Jul 13, 2012
This is really good but you could add more details and descriptions to it. That way it would make the chapter longer.
TheAwesomeJayJay98 TheAwesomeJayJay98 Dec 08, 2011
@AgathaChristieLover WOW! That's an achievement :D Congratulations to her.
AgathaChristieLover AgathaChristieLover Dec 08, 2011
@jayjay98 Yeah, I'm proud of my cousin, she won the DNSDC Airwoman of the Year today.
TheAwesomeJayJay98 TheAwesomeJayJay98 Dec 08, 2011
@AgathaChristieLover That's courage serving in both World Wars. Just goes to show our service mens dedication :) You must be pretty proud of him