A dark free-verse poem that tells the story of nine girls who go their own way in the world instead of listening to the warnings of others.
This is so beautifully morbid. It would make a fantastic horror story.
I really liked it. I liked how you fit all the bad things in this world into it
I was secretly wondering which one I'd want to be but I'm actually glad I'm in my room and have these walls around me, when i'm reading it it's like the walls collapse and my sense of security has gone.
I. LOVE. IT!!
It's horrifying, thrilling, and beautiful all twisted into one! Absolutely amazing! :D
i've got to say, i absolutely love this. even though it would probably frighten my friends if i were to share this with them. ah well. *shrugs* can't please everyone.
you should make these into nine chapters and edit them on your free time for fun... or when you have writers block. they have a lot of potential, but they are already very good! so do what you want